Hello!
I would like to begin with the comment that I believe that you have successfully investigated your artifact on your blog by showcasing your entire process. The connections you made between the animations and the “Sky Ray” creature such as the tail problem where it didn’t feel right. The process of production is shown from the beginning to the end with visual intensity which helps the reader relate to it much better. Thoughts and failures are also showcased which makes readers that doesn’t know anything about animating, help understand the difficulties of the process. Opinions of teammates are also taken during the process, thus showcasing the group effort taking place.
I believe the reflection provides value as it does what it intends to deliver which is the process of animating in an orderly fashion. As improvements, a connection between animations and the MDA Framework would have been welcoming but as it is not requirement I would believe that this is just a minor setback.
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